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Here I am, in your arms one last time
Feeling your ice-cold breath on my cheek
And Death's icy fingers coming to get me
For this time, my death is for real

Do not cry for me, my immortal love
I've cheated Death once before
I struck up a bargain with the archangels
And now, I have a debt to repay

Your venom is coursing through my veins
And yet, I smile through all my pain
I know you've done what's best for me
And for that, I'll remember you in eternity

I'm coming down to my last minutes now
I can see the blood tears coming down your cheek
I'll wipe them away one last time
And tell you not to mourn my passing

My last breath has come and is going
Your sweet, snowy face swims before my eyes
My soul is ready to flee my body
And at last, my heavenly debt will be squared

Somehow, I always knew you'd be the death of me
My undying lover...
©2008-2009 ~Angelwolfsfire
:iconangelwolfsfire:

Author's Comments

The death of a fallen angel.

There's only two things that can kill fallen angels: Spiritual darkness and vampire venom. Now, I know spiritual darkness is hard to explain, but vampire venom is pretty self-explanitory.

I guess you could call it a sort of tribute to two characters created for an RPG by me and my friend Damper(Saph, you already know who they are ^^). It reminds me of them a little...

Please let me know what you think. Steal and die.

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:iconwingsfire:
XD im so proud of u! its amazing and you said u couldn't write a poem... well thats a poem XD although i thought i made u write a song Oo w/e

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OO beware the blue M&M's
:iconangelwolfsfire:
:hug: Thank joo, Nagrom. I never said I couldn't write oetry, I just said I wasn't good at it.
And you did make me write a song. This isn't it. The song's not done yet ^^;

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I am Kate Beckinsale in dA's Celebrities Crew!
I am Carl in Van Helsing!
:iconwingsfire:
ur a slowpoke XD i wrote 9 minutes to live in 8 minutes... i had a minute left over XDDD

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OO beware the blue M&M's
:iconangelwolfsfire:
Oh, you shut up, Nagrom >.< I wrote this in maybe twelve minutes. I have a harder time with songs

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I am Kate Beckinsale in dA's Celebrities Crew!
I am Carl in Van Helsing!
:iconwingsfire:
songs are easier than poems

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OO beware the blue M&M's
:iconangelwolfsfire:
Really? I always thought poems were easier. Songs usually have to have a beat, but poems don't have to have a beat...

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I am Kate Beckinsale in dA's Celebrities Crew!
I am Carl in Van Helsing!
:iconkiyora-sano:
*sniff* *sniff*

that's really nice!! :P super sad, but nice! i :heart: Genatherine!

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"I'm a peripheral visionary - I can see into the future but just way off to the side." ~steven wright

:dygel: We that are true lovers run into strange capers. as you like it :dygel:
:iconangelwolfsfire:
Awww, thanks! :hug: Genatherine? I like that! I'll have to tell Damper that one...

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I am Kate Beckinsale in dA's Celebrities Crew!
I am Carl in Van Helsing!
:iconkiyora-sano:
hahahah. i just did a charlotte-to-lucien one. :D cause i was bored.

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"I'm a peripheral visionary - I can see into the future but just way off to the side." ~steven wright

:dygel: We that are true lovers run into strange capers. as you like it :dygel:

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